You have had a problem with your neighbor for the past few months. You have not been able to meet with your neighbor to discuss the problem. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: Explain the problem Suggest a solution Say what action you will take if the situation does not improve

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to express my feeling about a problem which is created by you. In fact, I can not meet with you to talk about

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. Recently, your children make lots of noise and it bothers me. Indeed, these days I am working at home and need a quiet place to concentrate on my tasks.

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, they play football at midnight,

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I can not sleep until they finish their play. In my opinion, there are some solutions that should be considered by you to solve

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issue.

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, you should dedicate specific time to their plays.

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, you should not allow them to play during the midnights and early mornings.

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, you should bring them to the park every day where they play soccer there.

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, there are two parks in our neighbourhood and each one has a proper football field. I like to solve

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problem peacefully.

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, if the problem is not solved, I have to complain to the city council. I appreciate your prompt attention regarding

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matter. You sincerely, Mohammad Hossein Ranjbari

ranjbari4526Wed Aug 17 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

182 words

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