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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Some
people
 argue that the most important point when living our
life
 is adapting to our present circumstances. They admit their conditions
such
 as occupation or money. But some other
people
 believe
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 the opposite side, which we are supposed to keep finding new developments as long as we are alive. Discussing
this
 question is important to find how to live our
life
 properly and happily.
People
 who think they are stuck in some bad situations choose adaptation to survive in their own
life
. Someone used to say adaptation is important to find happiness in their present
life
.
For example
, sometimes we would face unpredictable accidents we can't easily overcome
such
 as a car crash or illness. If we encounter those sorts of incidents, we can hardly find an exit so we must accept the situation,
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 we have to search for our own way of being a happy person and it is one of the crucial aspects of living a wise
life
.
On the other hand
, there are
people
 who assert that we always need to try our best in order to live a successful
life
. They believe that when we face a negative condition, it is the best way to find improvement. These kinds of
people
 think there are a bunch of possibilities all around the world so we can find a way of solving a problem. Many
people
 think that positive and passionate moments are necessary to improve our abilities and conditions,
however
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this
 perspective needs a lot of energy if we stick. As the evidence stated above, it is clear that both types are needed when we live our
life
. we have to learn methods of accepting our hard situations and find happiness by ourselves. Plus we are supposed to try our best to live properly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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