Some employers offer their employees subsidized membership of gyms and sport clubs,believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work.Other employees see no benifit in doing so.
Nowadays for the productivity of
the
companies,employers are constantly get rewarded.Some Correct article usage
apply
people
believe ,offering
Correct word choice
that offering
sport
and gym Fix the agreement mistake
sports
membership
as a
economical Change the article
an
reward
is efficient
than any other way of Correct quantifier usage
more efficient
reward
.In my opinion
having a Add a comma
,opinion
reward
for physical maintenance is much more worth than any other thing.
Some people
in companies think that they will not get any advantage by having a membership
in physical centers
or Change the spelling
centres
sport
organizations.To elaborate,some of them think that monetary Change the noun form
sports
gift
or any special gifts may be worthy enough to resolve the hardships of their terrible lives.Because Fix the agreement mistake
gifts
warning
of a common man in a developing country is considerably low.Correct article usage
the warning
For example
,If a person is working full time and over time for a company
he is in need of money rather than any Add a comma
,company
membership
.In that case
if he got rewarded by Add a comma
,case
a members
token of Correct the article-noun agreement
members
a member
such
a fitness
center
will he be pleased?Having a double payment is much more with for Change the spelling
centre
people
like this
.So the reward
he expect
might be a huge difference Change the verb form
expects
for
his Change preposition
in
life
.
On the other hand
,Having a workout daily or playing a game in
a court makes your problems vanish.As in,For Change preposition
on
majority
of Add an article
the majority
people
fitness
is a
accelerating need.When you have to claim Change the article
an
such
Add an article
a such
the such
reward
from workplace
will always Add an article
the workplace
a workplace
benefit
Replace the word
beneficial
for
the longevity of Change preposition
apply
life
also
aid to stabilize mental and physical well-being.Correct word choice
and also
For instance
,Indeed, working out daily Correct your spelling
definitely
defenetely
make physics and mental status strong.Correct your spelling
definitely
Therefore
,it grants you a healthy life
.However
frequent physical activities reach you a distressed life
.
In conclusion,some think that having a workout membership
is comparatively advantageous
than any other specific Correct quantifier usage
more advantageous
reward
.This
essay argued, why people
are not so fond with
physical subside whereas some of them are primarily interested Change preposition
of
with
Change preposition
in
fitness
token
.Fix the agreement mistake
tokens
Finally
,In my opinion
I think the best Add a comma
,opinion
reward
one can get as a
economical appreciation is a Change the article
an
fitness
membership
.Submitted by gihanagaya1993 on
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