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Some people have the same type of job throughout their lifetime , while other prefer to change the type of job they do.discuss why people choose to do both and give your opinion.

#people #type #job #lifetime #change
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In ancient times
people
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 are staying at
one
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job
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 till their retirement but in the current time, more and more individuals frequently
change
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 their
profession
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 in a year. Some
people
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 have the same type of
job
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 over the period, while others prefer to
change
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 the
job
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 they do. In
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 essay, I will look at both views and I will explain my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs. On the
one
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 hand, in my opinion, there are many reasons why some public continues the same
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 till their retirement.
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 and foremost, some individuals are happy with their
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,
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 is because they want to enhance their career in
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field
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 and do not want to switch to another.
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, take my friend Anil, who working as a web developer for the
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 5 years and still doing the same
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 and earning a high salary along with expertise in
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field
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.
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, some public have an interest in their particular career and they want to live their ancestor rituals to follow their work for that reason, they continue their
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 in
one
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 sector. But sometimes employe are facing difficulties attending to the same rules on an everyday basis.
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, some individuals want to switch their type of
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 from
one
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 sector to another. To illustrate
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 more, due to bad workplace and low salary many
people
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change
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 their work into different sectors.
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, in a recent survey by the Indian Government it can be seen that in the
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 few years record, more than 50% of employees
change
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 their call centre
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 and placed in the Marketing
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.
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, due to a bad workplace and hectic schedules,
people
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change
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 their professions.
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, some
people
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also
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 want to gain different experiences from various sectors, which helps them to find out better career options. In conclusion, after considering all, in my opinion, I think that stay in
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job
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 and continue it till retirement, it helps to gain our experience in
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field
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.
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, employees can expertise in
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profession
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, which is now high in demand.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Job security
  • Stability
  • Expertise
  • Mastery
  • Career advancement
  • Personal growth
  • Development
  • Acquiring
  • Skills
  • Knowledge
  • Exploring
  • Career paths
  • Opinion
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