Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the reals need of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In our modern society, there are a variety of
goods
sold all over the world. Especially, people spend a lot of money to buy them because of the strong advertising power even though they do not need to buy some of the goods
. I totally disagree with this
situation
.
First of all, the situation
has a serious impact on environmental problems. For example
, we consume a large number of materials including water, trees, plastics and metals for making many goods
for sale. Additionally
, our important energy resources were used drastically for the process of making them, which leads to global warming as well. Therefore
, this
makes it clear that the situation
affects environmental issues greatly.
Moreover
, the situation
decreases happiness levels with the lacking
of money. Replace the word
lack
For instance
, most people try to get new technology devices and high brand
Add a hyphen
high-brand
goods
owing to the massive advertisement
nowadays, Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
then
they spend a lot of money and always suffer from their difficult financial situation
. Recent research conducted by United
Nations in 2020 showed that countries with many consumptions by advertisements got a 30% lower point for the satisfaction level of their life. Correct article usage
the United
Thus
, it has become apparent that a larger consumption can affect their happiness level.
In conclusion, we discussed the disadvantages of the situation
in terms of environmental issues and the happiness level. For those two reasons, I significantly disagree with the situation
. After a thorough analysis of this
subject, it is predicted that citizens will concern
deeply Verb problem
be
about
their consumption in the future.Correct word choice
concerned about
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