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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Many people go to universities to acquire
skill
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 and knowledge, hoping to eventually get a good placement. But not all
graduates
, despite getting good grades, find themselves employed.
This
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this
 and present my opinion on what can be done to reduce the rate of unemployment among
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graduates
. There are many factors that contribute to the unemployment of college and university pass-outs.
First
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 one is the highly questionable traditional teaching practice in
the
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grad schools, which is not sufficient to land a job after a course is finished. They do not employ modern
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 techniques, which deter
graduates
 from a place in a reputable company.
For example
, the
companies
 in Nepal are in search of people who can do research on hydropower feasibility but the most popular institution Pulchowk campus offers a degree in civil engineering based on theory only without any site-based practical or research facilities.
As a result
, the
graduates
 cannot get a position in those
companies
. Another factor is the admission of too many students in one subject, resulting in more
graduates
 than needed for a country.
For example
,
Nepal
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 government demands only about 150 civil engineers in a year but admits more than 2000
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 their engineering colleges. Because of
this
, many
graduates
 remain unemployed. In my opinion, to overcome
this
,
practical-based
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 study should be included in the syllabus that results in fulfilment of the demand of today's
companies
. For an instance, if the government includes a research-focused hydrological study in its course of civil engineering,
graduates
 will have
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 to build water-related structures that will attract the owners of hydropower
companies
.
This
 results in more employment for highly qualified
graduates
. In conclusion,
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 of
modern
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 approach in the related subjects and higher admissions than required are the main factors that contribute to unemployment among the
graduates
.
This
 can be solved if more field-related studies are covered in the respective courses.
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