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Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government , while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Many
folk
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 believe that pivotal positions in the
government
 should not be filled by youngsters, while others assume that it is a good movement for putting young people on these duties. I would discuss both statements and my personal point of view. Nowadays, the older
generation
 fills crucial jobs in the
government
 because of their experiences. It happens in the majority of countries around the world due to the older
generation
 feels that they have the capability to take these positions appropriately even though they are not able to adapt to the growth of
technology
.
As a result
, the authority does not have massive improvement.
On the other hand
, some people argue that imperative jobs in the
government
 should be filled by the younger
generation
 in order to make relevant policies in
this
 era. At
this
 moment,
this
 group believe that it is an appropriate way to improve the authority's job.
For instance
, Holland has used
this
 method for several decades, and it really works for their country. In my way of thinking, I prefer to choose the youngsters to lead the
government
. It is because
the
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young adult tends to find
the
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appropriate ways with mixing their experience and the newest
technology
. To take an example, France's citizen chooses Macron, a young adult as their president, and Macron mixes his knowledge and
the
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technology
 for solving France's problems and using the
technology
 appropriately. To summarize, it is undoubtedly that regeneration in the
government
's body is really needed by the citizen in
this
 era. The older
generation
 should be changed by the young
generation
 as soon as possible in order that they can make rules that are relevant to
this
 era. If the majority of people
on the whole
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 agree with
this
 statement, I believe that there will be many changes to the rules.
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