Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government , while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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believe that pivotal positions in the

government

should not be filled by youngsters, while others assume that it is a good movement for putting young people on these duties. I would discuss both statements and my personal point of view. Nowadays, the older

generation

fills crucial jobs in the

government

because of their experiences. It happens in the majority of countries around the world due to the older

generation

feels that they have the capability to take these positions appropriately even though they are not able to adapt to the growth of

technology

.

As a result

, the authority does not have massive improvement.

On the other hand

, some people argue that imperative jobs in the

government

should be filled by the younger

generation

in order to make relevant policies in

this

era. At

this

moment,

this

group believe that it is an appropriate way to improve the authority's job.

For instance

, Holland has used

this

method for several decades, and it really works for their country. In my way of thinking, I prefer to choose the youngsters to lead the

government

. It is because

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young adult tends to find

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appropriate ways with mixing their experience and the newest

technology

. To take an example, France's citizen chooses Macron, a young adult as their president, and Macron mixes his knowledge and

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technology

for solving France's problems and using the

technology

appropriately. To summarize, it is undoubtedly that regeneration in the

government

's body is really needed by the citizen in

this

era. The older

generation

should be changed by the young

generation

as soon as possible in order that they can make rules that are relevant to

this

era. If the majority of people

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agree with

this

statement, I believe that there will be many changes to the rules.