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Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Others thinks face to face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Social networking applications have brought a revolution in the web world
as a result
 more and more people getting to know each other. A few people believe that
this
 is a good trend whereas another group of society opines physical presence is necessary. I shall discuss both thoughts in the upcoming paragraphs with my opinion.
To begin
 with, online chatting is the only source of interaction in
this
 fast-paced life. Socializing is very difficult for People
such
 as foreign workers and students who study in boarding schools
hence
 the internet provides an accessible platform for communication. I would like to mention the COVID 19 pandemic time when physical contact was prohibited to control the disease
then
 online applications eg. Facebook, Snapchat,and Instagram have been the real support for everyone to communicate with friends and family. Going with the other group, Face-to-face talk is very important. Talking to someone is more satisfactory when we are able to look into the eye and see their facial expressions. Psychology has a specific section that discusses human personality with face gestures which
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 used by most of the interviewers to examine the interview. Being physically available to someone provides warmth and a sense of security. I believe, Both opinions
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 their own value. Where internet pro
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