Every year several languages die out. Some think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

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and culture have gone along together in a long history of
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. Unfortunately, many
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disappear from the world every year. Some
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believe that
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is not significant, but I would argue that the loss of
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is a regrettable phenomenon. it would be regretful [?] . There are more than 7,000
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around the world including dialects. Each
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is related to
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local culture, as known as culture shapes the
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and vice versa. The advantage is the diversity of
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.
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, when
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speak different
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, they have different unique abilities. Some
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apply
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gender to every noun.
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, the sun and the moon are given a grammatical
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gender in Spanish and French, but they have different genders in each of these
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are swapped sex in the countries ].
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,
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might describe the sun as beautiful in
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country, and as strong in another. feel strong for the sun in a country, as feel beautiful in another country.
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islands do not have a
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counting have
mounting have
counting system, so the
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who
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use using
these
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cannot identify the exact numbers. They can categorise only
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, two, some, and many.
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,
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mathematics mathematic
and algebra cannot be used in these
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this
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language
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; fortunately, mathematics and algebra
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are not important in their lives
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. Nowadays, the governments in many countries encourage their societies society to learn learning
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popular
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, as
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second
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. They added to their
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curriculums subjects
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as English and Mandarin. Life is more complicated when every human has to learn more than
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language
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at the same time. In conclusion, each
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has
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own
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beauty
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, and it has transferred passed from
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generation to the
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/ or to the other others
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protecting
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is
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preferable.
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