You should spend 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the percentage of enrolments on six courses at a local education college in the UK in 2010 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. WRITING TASK
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The pie graphs display the proportion of enrolments in six subjects at a local British education from 2010 to 2012.
And the most evident sign
that is
given by the diagram is social studies, in which data
decrease normally from 27% to 21%. However
, The data
on nursing undergo a sharp reduction of 11.7%, which is the most evident change in the graphs. And there is a slightly
descend to 5% in carpentry.
Change the word
slight
On the other hand
, the data
on engineering, psychology and sports science was similar to each other's trends and totally different from the other three data
previously mentioned. The figure for them reached respectively 18.5%, 18% and 25.5%
To sum up
, the data
for nursing, social studies and carpentry was decreasing during 2010-2012, meanwhile, the data
for the rest of it were rising at the same time.Submitted by 2207433166 on
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