Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others think they should only be allowed subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

What
subjects
should children learn in their schools? Is there something relevant to their own interest or something beneficial to their future?
This
problem always sparks a heated discussion in
society
. But in my opinion, students should study the
subjects
which will be useful in a few years. The main reason I support
this
idea is that
this
will definitely benefit
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both individuals and
society
. For children, being taught
subjects
associated with their future careers means they will have
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likely hood to work in suitable fields after graduating.
For example
, those who major in finance or
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are likely to find well-paid jobs in banks or stoke companies.
Besides
, for the country, if there are more people with adequate knowledge related to science, technology and medicine, there are more professionals in our
society
.
Consequently
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will develop faster and better because of their efforts. Some may argue that students should be allowed to learn whatever they are interested in, or they will not show their whole talent. But the fact is that our
society
does not have so
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and so diverse positions for them to earn their livings.
For instance
, some people desire to learn abstract painting in their
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they have a dream of becoming a successful artist like Picasso.
However
, when they graduate they probably find there are neither no places for them to take jobs nor others to buy their
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because they have not already become famous. In a word,
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influence on individuals' future. In conclusion, I believe that university students are better
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exposed to useful
subjects
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their campus which will bring advantages to their life and our country,
instead
of just allowing them to study whatever they like.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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