You are planning to visit another city and your friend knows some people who live there and has suggested you contact them. Write to these people. In your letter • enquire about good restaurants suitable for a budget traveller • enquire about places of interest to visit during your trip • suggest that you meet during your stay

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Dear Ali, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am planning to visit Gheshm island

month. I am writing to ask for some information about there and request some contact details about some local people who live there and can help me. In fact, I will accommodate in Gheshm for 8 days and I would not rather do cooking,

thus

if you know some restaurants which serve kinds of seafood and the price of their foods are reasonable, please send their locations and names. Indeed, I am travelling by car and during my trip, I will pass some cities, so you guide me about the tourist attraction on the way.

Furthermore

, please send your suggestions about the accommodation during my trip.

In addition

, please suggest eye-catching places which are located on

this

island.

Moreover

, email some photos that are related to these attractions. Do write back soon. Give your parents my regards. Best wishes, Mohammad

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