More and more people tend to watch foreign movies, so the local government should encourage the development of local film industry. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Movies recently have been becoming one of the most famous entertainments in the whole world. People nowadays prefer to watch foreign movies over

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local

film

, but it is argued that

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governments should push

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local

film

companies

to develop their films. I disagree with

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tend to disagree with that statement is

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usually local

film

companies

are already pushed by the government, but the

companies

themselves do not want to do their job appropriately due to the mindset of their workers.

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, Indonesia's government has encouraged some

companies

to develop their

film

in some ways

such

as conducting

film

training and technological training, but the knowledge that they got is not used by them

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appropriate because they do not want to spend a lot of money in which is needed for invented good movies.

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taste is another reason why the authority should not encourage the development of the

film

industry. People who live in developed countries usually have different tastes in

film

from folk who live in developing countries. American people and Indian

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,

for example

, both of them have differences in teste of

film

, and we can observe the films that both are produced by Hollywood and Bollywood

companies

in which American

companies

not only focus on the story

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and actors, while Indian's

companies

only focus on their story. To conclude, some countries have been doing

this

in order to make their local industry

companies

can invent good films, but the mindset of the workers and taste make

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useful.