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Some people think that it is an individual responsibility to take care of an environment but others think it is government's job to do so. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

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God has created the natural home in abundance
consequently
-called environment for both animals and humans to live without any objections. All the living beings have been enjoying the
nature
 home freely
on the contrary
 rare rarest ones have thought of taking care of it.
Moreover
, a number of human beings are in the view that it is every single person's job to look after the conservation and preservation of forests whereas other people are in the opinion that it is the regime's job to take the initiative of the responsibilities.
However
, I feel that it is every individual's duty and act as a catalyst to help politics in preserving and protecting the working environment.
This
 is due to the fact that since
nature
 benefits all living beings irrespective of forms, and background, every individual is accountable to shoulder the protection responsibility.
In addition
, every human is extraordinarily gifted with the tendency to help, work, and a sense of responsibility, each one of us can contribute a duty to achieve a common bigger goal. And
also
 to call as state, it is no other than own country people.
consequently
 together, both can achieve common goals.
Therefore
, If every individual contributes single labour
that is
 protecting the environment
such
 as using bio-degradable or eco-friendly things, renewable energy, using dustbin to dumb trashes, and reusing plastics it will definitely lead to protection. And of course, it is
also
 the authority's duty to promote the protection of
nature
 by setting exemplary to the citizen, formulating the rules for forest destruction, and conservating forest coverage by setting up rules on a certain percentage that need to be maintained.
Further
, since the government has the power to empower the people's motivation, they should recognize and reward those who sincerely work towards protecting
nature
. So, in nutshell, starting from the individual to form teamwork, everyone holds accountable to take care of mother
nature
 and protect from degrading.
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