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Some people think that universities should provide graduate with the knowledge and the skills needed in the workplace. Other think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What is your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

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Nowadays, more people are struggling to retain their jobs cause of their academics and job
skills
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 will explain how academics and
skills
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 are important to continue in
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. In some universities,
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 or internships are in their circular.
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way
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 students will
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education
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 and will learn communication
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. After graduation joined in
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work, they will get problems
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 communication and
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 tasks. Possible
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distractions easily.
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, everything is taught by universities pupils will be
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, they can't mould by
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them selves
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. As they have to show their own interest to get talent. By their
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 they can learn in online classes which are easily available
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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