some people believe that parents should be responsible for encouraging their children to take regular exercise. Others argue that the main responsibility for encouraging children to do so should lie with schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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in their lifestyle. They depend on many factors like the internet or social media, ….. On many forums, some people think that family has a huge effect on the encouragement of taking regular

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. Others say

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is the best place to take these

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for

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. Personally, I think both of them have the same responsibility for the encouragement of

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’ regular

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. First of all, from my viewpoint, parents are the main role

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so they have a major impact on the student who spent almost their childhood with their parents. For that reason, what the parent does or

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will have a big effect on their child.

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regular

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, the

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will imitate them and make it as their parents have done before.

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, spending a lot of

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encouraging

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to take regular

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to share their thinking, and desires,

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with their

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. Other people,

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, argue that schools should bear the main responsibility.

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will have lots of

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lessons.

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will be the best

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for

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to learn and have some

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because they will

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more motivated when they do them with their friends. The mandatory lessons

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help

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concentrate on their work than they do them alone at home. I personally feel that

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and family need

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the responsibility in taking

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’s

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.

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just do the

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don’t do it when they come back home, they will not find inspiration in these sports.

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and family need to connect

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to encourage their child to take regular

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exercises

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daily. As we have seen, both groups have an important role in encouraging

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to take the

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regularly

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they should make an attempt to help

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strong health