Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett,

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is Parham and I have seen your advertisement in a local magazine to find someone to assist you with some work at your place. I wanted to state that I will be available from the beginning of the summer. Let me explain more. According to your ad, I would be able to help you with your garden and keep your place tidy and clean by allocating some hours during the week.

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, I have a good background in working with electronic devices and fixing them which might be practical.

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my English is not perfect,

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would be a time to practice and learn more.

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, it would be a great chance for me to improve my language skills and meanwhile help you with your errands.

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, as I denoted, I will be available during the summer and specifically, I can help you during the weekdays from 3:00 to 6:00 in the evening. Please let me know if you would like me to assist you. Best regards, Parham

parhaashWed Aug 24 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

172 words

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