Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

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The given pie charts compare the difference between the proportion of ad spending by six media types in 2012 and that in 2017
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India. Overall, the general trend showed that expenditure for advertisement had no significant change between 2012 and 2017, except the spending
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digital and print. Television remained the most attractive choice to advertise throughout the period of 5 years,
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nearly half of the total spending. The largest segment for advertising was
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with 43% in 2017, and it slightly declined by 2% after 5 years. Following
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print advertisement decreased sharply by 10%, to just about a
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outdoor and cinema remained stable, hovering at 5% and 1%, respectively. Cinema was the least popular medium for advertisers in India after
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dread
  • passion
  • inherent talent
  • fufilling
  • career
  • job
  • fulfilled
  • unhappy
  • unsatisfied
  • work-life balance
  • burnout
  • stress
  • depression
  • anxiety
  • self-esteem
  • emotional well-being
  • potential
  • achieve
  • success
  • personal growth
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