Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Ohter argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In
present time unfavourable occupation and lack of budget Change preposition
At
is
getting a common issue. Many Change the verb form
are
people
have to tolerate with
these factors due to Change preposition
apply
competitive
society where it is challenging to find other jobs. On other hand, it is believed that working on the improvement of Correct article usage
a competitive
such
situations will be best
option. Change the article
the best
This
essay will discuss both opinions. In my opinion, it is better to look for other opportunities such
as studying abroad and changing employee
.
To commence with , most of Fix the agreement mistake
employees
public
are getting patient with their unloved Add an article
the public
job
and salary because they are worried to lose their existing job
. For instance
, even I
have completed Correct word choice
though I
degree
abroad I am still working in Correct article usage
a degree
Add an article
the low
low paid
and boring Add a hyphen
low-paid
Correct your spelling
workplace
work place
. The reason is that because of the scarcity of Correct your spelling
workplace
job
market it is impossible to easily find a job
especially
a high paid work. To illustrate, some Add the comma(s)
,especially
people
are trying their best to search for other jobs, changing their major and going through varied trainings
and workshops to enhance their professional Change the wording
training
pieces of training
skill
. Fix the agreement mistake
skills
This
would definitely Correct your spelling
change
chang
their poor condition. So , while one's attitude is stable and calm toward low income and not interesting jobs, others will seek for other employers and study Correct your spelling
change
unnesssry
Correct your spelling
unnecessary
degree
and courses .
On other hand, I totally believe that studying abroad and finding other job
is essential. Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
For example
, one of my aquantaise went to study abroad in Canada and after completion of her new degree
she easily found high paid Add a comma
,degree
job
in Canada. It provided her with exciting
Add an article
the exciting
an exciting
job
which was fascinating for her and at the same time increased her monthly salary to high demand.So, acquiring degree
abroad and looking for Correct article usage
a degree
new
perspective Add an article
a new
job
abroad assisted her in quitting her uninteresting job
and finding high- income
Correct article usage
an income
job
.
Most people
have to tolerate with
their boring workplace and Change preposition
apply
low -paid
salary Correct your spelling
low-paid
when
others are struggling with finding a better way Correct word choice
while
for
Change preposition
to
improvement
. Replace the word
improve
However
, getting better
or another education and looking for Correct article usage
a better
other
Change the wording
another
job
Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
search
will be Fix the agreement mistake
searches
best
opportunity for life imprisonment. If Change the article
the best
people
seek for
other chances Change preposition
apply
such
as education and new
Correct article usage
a new
job
it will change humankind's live standards to
Replace the word
too
high
extent .Add an article
a high
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