You recently notice a local restaurant that was offering a part time job. Write a letter to restaurant manager. In your letter, • Explain you would like to apply for a job • Give some details of any relevant experience that you have • Specify the days and times that would suit you.

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing to express my interest in a

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part time

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job that you have advertised, in

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dawn newspaper

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dated: 24th August 2022

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job classified section. I am keen interested in

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post as part of my course. As

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I am currently enrolling in

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the Master

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Master

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Degree program and my major is in Finance,

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, I want to exploit my skills and enhance my capabilities in that particular area of my interest.

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done my SAP certification, which

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brings efficiency and effectiveness

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your system, beside

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knowledge about the accounting system along with good communication skills which are crucial for any restaurant. I am free from Monday to Tuesday between 2 to 6.

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certainly sure that I can bring some skills which eventually will add

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your existing system. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Bhawani Shankar

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If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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162 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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