Some people think that teacher should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that
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should be responsible for teaching
students
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to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well.
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view may be held by people who don't want to take
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for the
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' bad
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, the administrators who feel difficulties to control crimes may see education as a solution to decrease the crime rate.
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, the parents who don't have the time to educate their
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may support
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opinion because
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would relieve their burden to educate
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on moral values.
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, there are other people
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that
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should only teach
students
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academic subjects, rather than take the
responsibility
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for the
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's behaviour.
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view may be supported by the schools and
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who do not want to take
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responsibility
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. They may claim that they are
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specialised
on academic subjects, rather than ethical standards since there is no fixed moral standard that can be applied to every single situation.
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, generally speaking, fighting against others is wrong, but if you have been bullied for a long time on campus, and the bully has never stopped even after you have asked
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for
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, should you continuous keep silent and be violated ? In my view,
teachers
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should take
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responsibility
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responsibility
to teach academic subjects, including law and general social ethics. But it doesn't mean that they are the only ones to take charge of the
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students
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behaviours
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, as family education has a more significant impact on
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's
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,
children
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who grow up in family violence may be more likely to have
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behaviours
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than other
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.
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means that parents should take more
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than schools and
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to educate their
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on the morality aspect. To conclude, to reduce the crime rate in society and to restrict the bad
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of
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, schools,
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, parents, and administrators should take
responsibility
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for
morality
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education together.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ethical development
  • moral compass
  • character building
  • values and principles
  • curriculum
  • academic knowledge
  • subject expertise
  • pedagogical approach
  • value education
  • moral dilemmas
  • social responsibility
  • behavioral norms
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