Some people think that teacher should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that
teachers
should be responsible for teaching
students
to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well.
This
view may be held by people who don't want to take
responsibility
for the
students
' bad
behaviours
.
For example
, the administrators who feel difficulties to control crimes may see education as a solution to decrease the crime rate.
Likewise
, the parents who don't have the time to educate their
children
may support
this
opinion because
this
would relieve their burden to educate
children
on moral values.
However
, there are other people
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that
teachers
should only teach
students
academic subjects, rather than take the
responsibility
for the
children
's behaviour.
This
view may be supported by the schools and
teachers
who do not want to take
such
responsibility
. They may claim that they are
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specialised
on academic subjects, rather than ethical standards since there is no fixed moral standard that can be applied to every single situation.
For instance
, generally speaking, fighting against others is wrong, but if you have been bullied for a long time on campus, and the bully has never stopped even after you have asked
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for
teachers
, should you continuous keep silent and be violated ? In my view,
teachers
should take
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responsibility
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responsibility
to teach academic subjects, including law and general social ethics. But it doesn't mean that they are the only ones to take charge of the
students
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student's
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behaviours
, as family education has a more significant impact on
children
's
behaviors
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behaviours
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.
For example
,
children
who grow up in family violence may be more likely to have
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behaviours
than other
children
.
This
means that parents should take more
responsibility
than schools and
teachers
to educate their
children
on the morality aspect. To conclude, to reduce the crime rate in society and to restrict the bad
behaviours
of
student
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, schools,
teachers
, parents, and administrators should take
responsibility
for
morality
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education together.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ethical development
  • moral compass
  • character building
  • values and principles
  • curriculum
  • academic knowledge
  • subject expertise
  • pedagogical approach
  • value education
  • moral dilemmas
  • social responsibility
  • behavioral norms
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