Many businesses choose to recruit from within their own company rather than sourcing staff from overseas. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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of industries select the
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paragraphs. To commence with,there are multifarious merits
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this
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similar employees of their industry only as it is beneficial for the
company
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hire
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workers
from their own industry
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do not need any type of training .
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the time and resources of the firm.
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reputation
become good in the market.
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trade with them in the long run.All in all,
this
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company
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salaries
also
rose to a large level. On the darker side,
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as it does generate employment opportunities .The new and more efficient
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to show their skills and succeed in life.The problem of unemployment is rising
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potential
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potential
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old labour
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the
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lazy as they know that
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jobs are secure ,
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full potential. To conclude,there are
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of benefits of
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job security to the labours which definitely outweighs its limitation.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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