Natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an increasing rate. What problems does this cause? How can they be solved?

We are now faced with the

problems

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of resource shortage, as

oil

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, forests and

fresh

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freshwater

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water

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are being used at a faster rate. They have negative effects on the environment and

health

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the health

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of

people

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. We should take measures to solve these problems.

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with, over-exploitation of the fossil and

oil

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cause

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pollutions

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pollution

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Oil

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leakage and spill during production and transport are extremely detrimental to the local ecosystem.

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, there are increased amount of car fumes due to expansion in the

oil

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consumptions

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. Studies show

that city residents

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are more likely to suffer from asthma and allergic rhinitis because of air

pollutions

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.

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, vast forests have been cut down to make products like paper and

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furniture

furnitures

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.

Dessertification

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Desertification

and global warming are the consequences of deforestation.

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,

people

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might lose their homes as they encounter

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extreme weather including sand

storm

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storms

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,

hurricanes

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and hurricanes

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due to climate change.

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, many

people

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are living with

shortage

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a shortage

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of clean

water

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, so they are more likely to suffer from infectious diseases. It is the liability of both

government

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and individuals to tackle

down

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these problems.

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, the

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should reduce the dependence on fossil

oil

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, while

introduce

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clean

energy

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, including solar

energy

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, wind

energy

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and hydroelectric power.

People

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should be encouraged to use electric cars to reduce carbon consumption. When commuting daily, individuals can choose public transport frequently.

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, greenhouse emissions will decrease and the air quality will increase significantly.

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,

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government

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the government

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should introduce laws to preserve clean

water

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resources,

for instance

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, companies and

fatories

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factories

will be fined for wasting

water

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in production. In

this

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way, residents can have access to clean

water

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without suffering from

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shortage. In conclusion, the over-consumption of

oil

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, forests and

fresh

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freshwater

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water

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cause

pollutions

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pollution

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and

jeporadize

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jeopardize

human survival. Both the

government

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and individuals should take the responsibility to preserve natural resources and use more clean

energy

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instead

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