Some people are born to be leaders, others believe leadership can be learnt. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, It is undeniable that
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of
leader
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in our self is very crucial to enhancing human
skills
. The notion concerning
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better
leadership
skills
, triggers a considerable debate, as regards, Put forward by the cluster of like-minded
people
who believes that some individuals have a natural talent of a
leader
since birth, Others
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do not follow suit and feel that better
leadership
can be acquired by learning.
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essay will analyse both twain sides in advance of my personal opinion. The majority of
people
believe that good leaders are born genetically.
This
can be a bane and the particular reason for
this
circumstance is not a developed mind.
For instance
, newborn children are very fresh-minded and they try to copy their parents, and some house members are involved in political parties by which they learn
skills
to become
a good leaders
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by which they make efforts but they are not able to achieve their levels because they do not have enough knowledge about decisions which they are making,
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a survey has been conducted by researchers, resulting that small children are not as good leaders as compared to mature once. Despite the above arguments I side with those who support that knowledge is required to be a good
leader
. The predominant reason is that
leadership
is the most hand opportunity because most
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people
have to follow decisions made by them. ,
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proper experience and knowledge
is
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required to make a decision to overcome any problem. ,
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it would not be out of place to mention that Nowadays, many illegal activities are happening due to bribes and
this
dishonesty and these the sign of bad
leadership
skills
. Individuals must be mentally prepared and well educated by
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they can acquire the seat of a
leader
. To epitome, Modi was elected by
people
who once
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tea on a stall and he took bad decisions which
was
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not beneficial to
people
. In conclusion, there are convincing points on both. side but
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side with those who are in favour that good
leadership
should no learned
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