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Some people think the government should focus on improving the economy of the country. Other people think that government should focus on social services such as health and education programs. Which statement do you agree with? Explain and provide examples to support your opinion.

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I disagree with
this
 statement,
government
 should focus only economy. Many countries focus to develop economies
instead
 of spending
money
 on the public care sector.
This
 may lead to citizens' problems with spending
money
 on hospitals. The
government
 is running on the economy, if there is no investment in development, can't generate
money
. If there is no proper transportation and utility
people
 can't spend their
money
, It will be with them.
However
, leaders should acknowledge what their citizmakeethe ed and make ready with that plans,
Instead
 of without proper knowledge. More industries make the country wealthy by paying taxes to employers and employees. Many
people
 secure their jobs and enhance their living requirements. And
this
 may lead to proper education in the development of universities. As well as, the administration should spend
money
 on the public
health
 sector too.
For Instance
, every country has faced bad experiences with Covid 19 virus pandemic. In some countries unable to maintain proper hospital utilities
such
 as the required medical team, equipment, and medicines, and these are caused to death rate high. Everyone can't afford medical treatments, in
this
 case, authorities should support the
people
.
Government
 should spend
money
 on their national
health
 awareness programs. Nowadays, most
people
 are affected by cholesterol, blood pressure, heart problems, and diabetes. For these types of
health
 issues
government
 should build parks, walking tracks, and gymnasiums and utilize these properly.
Finally
, I agree that
government
 should have a plan to develop the economy and as well maintain hospitals'
people
's awareness of
health
 care habits.
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