You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: - correct the information in the article. - explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information. - suggest what the magazine should do about this situation.

Dear Sir, I am writing to highlight
an incorrect
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information
mentioned in one of the articles
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your
magazine
which has put a dent
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the image of my town. My name is Aman Malik, and I live in Gurgaon. While I was travelling
last
week, I got the chance to glance through your
magazine
for the month of August, at the airport. There I saw the article regarding my town Gurgaon, where you
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highlighted that due to the lack of infrastructure, the MNCs are moving their offices out from here.
This
information
,
however
, is completely incorrect, and
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in fact
infact
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in fact
, it is becoming one of the fastest growing corporate
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in India with some new office spaces getting launched every month. As I am aware that your
magazine
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following in every corner of the world, it
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really important on your part to re-check every
information
that you publish in your
magazine
.
This
incorrect
information
has put a wrong portrayal
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my city on a global platform which will have a negative impact on the future development of the city. I would request you to kindly reverify your facts and publish an apology post in your
magazine
with
correct
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data. If required, I will be more than happy to provide you with some
information
and photos in
this
regard. I hope you will pay heed to my concerns and take
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actions. Please feel free to write to me if I could be of any help in providing you
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information
. Yours sincerely, Aman Malik
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rectify
  • Misrepresentation
  • Tourism
  • Editor
  • Credibility
  • Accuracy
  • Local heritage
  • Fact-checking
  • Repercussions
  • Counteractive measures
  • Publishing ethics
  • Clarification
  • Factual error
  • Misconception
  • Authenticity
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