Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: * suggest how you could help her in her home * say why you would like to do this work * explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I checked your advertisement in which you mentioned that you were looking for someone to help you in your home. I am writing to you to express my interest to take up
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. For the upcoming summer, I can help you with your daily chores like cooking, cleaning and dog walking. I would like
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because, in the summers, most college students enjoy their semester break, so it is very difficult to find a part-time
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, I have already worked as an assistant chef for a restaurant and know how to cook hygienic food.
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, I always wanted a dog for myself, so taking care of yours is something that I am really excited about. As you already know that I will be on my semester break, and I will be available for two months in town. I would be working for you from 8 AM to 12 PM and would not be available in the evenings as I would
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. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Dhruva Ahuja.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Domestic chores
  • Culinary skills
  • Horticulture
  • Cultural immersion
  • Work ethic
  • Flexible schedule
  • Time management
  • Prior commitments
  • Punctuality
  • Reliability
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