You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food • suggest what the manage should clo to improve the foocl in future

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Dear
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Manager, I am Mr Ravi from Telus company who organised a meeting at your
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on 2nd September and would like to provide feedback on the event.
Firstly
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, the team was mesmerized by the
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reception entry area with the spectacular furniture and mid-blowing water pond in the middle of the lobby.
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, the entire team was not happy with the
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with what they served.
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, the vegan
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itself was not even cooked properly,
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, most of the team members came out of the
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with an empty stomach which is not at all expected.
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, they did not feel like eating fresh
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as they could not have any hot items on their plate. As you heard, I would strongly recommend you to replace the chef right away before it gets worse and provide some intensive training if required to conduct a few assessments to improve the
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quality. It would be really good if you can focus more on vegan
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preparations with a few additional options as most of the community members would like to have the same. I look forward to seeing the change to have nice and the best
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at your
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. Best regards, Lakshmi.
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