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Topic 2: These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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People have different views about families that fly overseas to find
a better jobs
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. While others believe it will make their kids struggle, I believe that it will be beneficial for the family's offspring. As families move abroad their kids are welcome to
a better
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better education prospects
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education
 prospects. It will help them to pursue their learning in a well-known school or university which can allow them to have better
education
.
Furthermore
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 they can have better knowledge and be armed with skills that are needed in life. Take the immigrants from India as an example, the move to the USA so they can provide their
heir
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heirs
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 with better
education
 and opportunity.
This
 led to an increased number of Indian engineers.
On the other hand
, moving to another place make kids have to adapt to the new environment.
This
 phenomenon put some
children
 in
a
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difficult
circumstance
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 as they try to fit in,
furthermore
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 they have to spend most of their time studying the culture and language of the new country. To blend into the community is a vital need, whereas the need to pursue a better
education
. There are various things that can help
children
 to face
this
 problem
such
 as counselling services
provides
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 by the school. In conclusion, moving abroad can allow
children
 to have better
education
 prospects but
also
 put them in a difficult position.
However
, there are ways to help them face
the
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difficulties. In my opinion,
children
 will have more benefits than its drawback.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Migration
  • Globalization
  • Opportunities
  • Diversity
  • Assimilation
  • Adaptability
  • Language acquisition
  • Education
  • Career prospects
  • Social connections
  • Isolation
  • Cultural identity
  • Support systems
  • Parental guidance
  • Ambiguous
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