Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Embraced by many people as limiting

subjects

such

as science and technology in university are believed to promise

students

a brighter future to have stable jobs. While others assume that they have every right to choose their favourite majors.

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article will look into both statements and personal ideas. Definitely, restricting university

students

to learn certain

subjects

is an easy argument to make. These departments are chosen to contribute visibly to society.

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, improvement in medicine or surgery technic

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on medical advances or engineering with numerous assistances from technology and science. Having graduated from those majors, the

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are easy to find a job

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However

, only allowing

students

to persuade these departments can lead to an overcrowded

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the labour force in the near future.

Therefore

, learning their favourite

subjects

is still prefered by the majority of

students

For instance

, if there was a brand new industry, which need solid writing skills or artistic creativity and

students

are typically trained to be an engineer or a doctor, how could they do that? But whether it is the case or not, the avenue of getting a job in favourite degrees is much harder than in former majors. So it depends on their decisions. Overall, while is reasonable to force learn

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useful, I believe that they should be encouraged to learn whatever they want so that they can help better prepare for whatever changes the future will bring.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Include an introduction and conclusion

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