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Society would benefit from complete ban on all forms of advertisements. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#society #ban #forms #advertisements
In contemporary life, advertisements have a great impact on almost the whole world's population. Unfortunately, they usually have been sending non-realistic messages to people and some claims that all kind of advertisements should be removed from our lives. Despite the fact, that most of these kinds of promotions are annoying and have side effects
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 communities, I disagree that banning them is the solution for humanity.
To begin
 with, advertisements are based on marketing strategies,
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 the main goal
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 to promote their products to the public with appropriate slogans and design tools.
Therefore
, these
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the average society on a conscious basis, which
as a result
 lead them to purchase
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the product.
However
, sometimes it might result
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 bad
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habits
habbits
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habits
 without understanding all aspects of the process.
For example
, in the middle of the 19th century, most tobacco companies in
US
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 designed their
ciggarete
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cigarette
cigarettes
 packages based on societies' values
such
 as
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the sign
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sign
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signs
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 of elegance or
musculine
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masculine
 power.
Thus
, people who
payed
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 for these packs of
ciggaretes
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cigarettes
, felt themselves
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happier and prefered to ignore the side effects of the product. Luckily, thanks to
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governmental
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govermental
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government
 intervention
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these kind
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 of marketing plans, some restrictions were applied to the policy of sending the message to the communities.
As a result
, nowadays, we can see the scripts on each
ciggarete
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cigarette
 packs the short script or illustrations about its side effects.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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