Men do most of the high-level jobs. Should the company encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women What is your opinion on that? Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
İt is considered by some people that
men
do most of the high-level jobs
. I completely disagree with the opinion
and in my opinion
, the company
should encourage a certain percentage of these jobs
to be reserved for women
and equality between men
and women
.
Firstly
, the company
generally prefer men
over women
therefore
, the proportion of women
in companies
experienced a decrease . Thus
, bad opinions expose among people such
as only men
can work in the best jobs
or women
can be Add an article
a housewife
housewife
. Fix the agreement mistake
housewives
On the other hand
, these considerations revealing
many troubles Wrong verb form
reveal
such
as inequality between women
and men
or unsuccess in jobs
. For instance
, the increased incomes of companies
can increase thanks to women
if companies
will give women
a chance .
Another point to consider is that companies
should encourage a certain percentage of these jobs
to be reserved for women
. İn my opinion
, there are many important women
such
as scientists women
or teachers women
and women
can help for company
and the
benefit Correct article usage
apply
of
the government if Change preposition
apply
companies
give women
jobs
right . For instance
, according to my experience , ı entered a job
two years ago and by the way , any women
didn't work in this
company
. Afterwards , a job
is given to me by my manager to solve the trouble but ı couldn't solve it . Thus
the company
took women
to solve the trouble one year later and she could solve the trouble . I mean , many women
can help companies
when they have a job
right in companies
.
İn conclusion , the company
should encourage a certain percentage of these jobs
to be reserved for women
thus
, many women
can rescue from bad things which seen and also
, companies
can acquire more income when they give to women
a job
right . İn my opinion
, society shouldn't say 'men
do most of the high-level jobs
' because women
can do most of the high-level jobs
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