You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organiser of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include Details about the meeting The problem you face What should be done
Hello dear Mr Johnson
I am one of your participants who joined your
last
meeting which has taken place in Toronto last
weekend as a senior manager in order to negotiate the multinational contract's circumferences that will accommodate in Toronto along with the evening meal.
I am writing this
letter in order to draw your kind notice for arranging the event in a five-star multi-luxurious hotel but the arrangements and dishes had some problems that I want to mention them. also
, I have some recommendations that may be efficient.
Initially
,If I want to describe more about some difficulties that happened during the session,I should say the plates of seafood served there were not fresh adequately moreover
, the conference hall's air conditioner didn't work appropriately . Therefore
,these may seem like some trivial disorders but controversially could completely impact our next
session's foreign guest's respect for the commitment.
For the last
thing,I am going to give some piece of advice to change the place for the latter sit in order to prevent these kinds of scandals in such
an important colloquium.
I would kindly appreciate it if you incorporate the aforementioned issues.
Your's sincerely
Masoumeh DehbashiSubmitted by mr.rahimi30 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite