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Band 7.5

Write at least 150 words. You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • Say why the company should consider you for the job You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir,

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Dear sir, I am Kan Patel, I recently came over through your job advertisement in the newspaper. I am writing you
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 as I am interested in your job. The team is looking for the post of assistant supervisor in the IT department. I worked as a team leader in
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 IT group for over three years. I have been working with web development, software testing, and graphics designing for a long period of time. I have
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 attended international meetings with my previous company. If your company gives me one chance, definitely I will be an asset to
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 company. You can contact me either by my mobile phone at 1234567890 or by email. And my email is [email protected]. I am attaching some of my great work below. So that you can come to know about my skills in the information and technology department.
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, I am doing
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 in information and technology from one of the best colleges in Canada. I am waiting for your positive reply. I hope you will reply to me as soon as possible. yours faithfully, Kan

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing to express my interest in the [Position] advertised in [Newspaper].
  • I have [number] years of experience in [Your Field/Industry].
  • In my previous role at [Previous Company], I was responsible for [Key Responsibilities].
  • I successfully [Achievement or Project], which resulted in [Result/Impact].
  • I am particularly attracted to [Company Name] because of [Reason].
  • I believe my skills in [Key Skill] and [Another Skill] align well with the requirements of the job.
  • My ability to [Relevant Skill or Experience] would make a valuable addition to your team.
  • I am eager to contribute to [Company Name]’s success by [How You Can Contribute].
  • Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the possibility of discussing my application further.
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