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Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing their new office next to your apartment. - Introduce yourself - Describe problems you are facing because of this - Suggest solutions

#manager #company #office #apartment
Dear Sir or Madame, I am Jenny who is currently living in the apartment
next
 to the office that you are building. I'm writing
this
 letter to inform you that the noise you have been making is beyond just loud
especially
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,especially
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 in the
night time
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nighttime
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. I have been having
hard
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a hard
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 time sleeping because of the massive sound. I have a job where I have to wake up early in the morning meaning that It is very important for me to go to bed earlier than most
of
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apply
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the
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apply
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other people. I understand you and your co-workers work hard to get the office done but would you please lower the noise after 10 pm? I know you guys start working around noon every day but can you consider
start
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starting
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 off
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earlier
eariler
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earlier
 from now on so that you can finish it earlier
.
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 That way, it won't affect the timeline that you have. Thank you so much for reading my letter. Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns!
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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