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The charts Below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relevant.

The charts Below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relevant.
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The given pie charts make comparisons
regions
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between regions
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 of the world in terms of
water
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 consumption. (industrial
use
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, agricultural
use
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, and domestic
use
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)
Overally
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Overall
, substantial
water
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 is consumed by agricultural
use
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 in Africa, Central Asia,
South-east
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Southeast
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 Asia and South
America
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,
while
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 industrial
use
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 makes up the majority of North American and European total
water
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 utilization. To initiate, As can be seen from represented charts, the trends in North
America
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 and Europe are approximately similar. 48% and 53% of total
water
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use
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in
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 North
America
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 and Europe,
whereas
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 39% and 32% of whole
water
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 usage go to stated counties. The figures for domestic
use
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 in North
America
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 and Europe are 13% and 15%.
Moreover
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,
it is clear that
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 industrial
use
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 contributes 7%, 5% ad 10% in Africa, Central Asia and South
America
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 to the total
water
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 consumption which is the lowest amount of
water
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 consumption,
whereas
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 the minority of
water
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 usage for The
South-east
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Southeast
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 is domestic
use
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 at 7%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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