Some people believe that employers should not be concerned about the way their employees dress, but they should be concerned about the quality at work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As the economy is advancing by leaps and bounds, the attitude people adopt towards
dress
code outstanding or comfortable
clothes
when staff go to
work
has undergone a noticeable and far-reading transformation. Under
this
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an absolute consensus is hardly reached as to whether bosses do not pay attention to the
dress
instead
of
concerned
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about
work
performance.
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my part,
although
the way people
dress
should be seen as irrelevant in many
work
contexts, I do believe that decent
clothes
still exist for good reason in certain professions.
To begin
with, those who are against wearing
clothes
that do not interfere with their
work
suppose that employers have relaxed
dress
attire to create a comfortable working environment for employees, make it easier for them to choose their
work
clothes
and increase
work
productivity.
Therefore
, the staff
work
will not be constrained by
dress
code which is the workplace corporations have not enacted laws.
In addition
, companies paid for solving problems in their
work
rather than paying them to
dress
well for corporate fashion.
For instance
, an office worker spends most of the time at a computer in a closed cubicle whatever they wear casual so
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does not change the level of productivity.
By contrast
, the companies need employees
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shown the feature of the brands
such
as bankers, doctors, sales hotel receptionists or fashionista
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wearing professional uniforms to express respect for the
work
.
Besides
, the
first
impression their customers when they see sales force
dress
politely which they will appreciate.
For example
, employees need to sign contracts or serve customers
then
they have to wear semi-casual to observe clients. To conclude, I am convinced that sales wear beautiful
clothes
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good
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reason for working
instead
of comfortable attires when going to
work
. From
this
point, professionalism in
dress
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a dress
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could help enhance the
recognition
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brand and compete with the opponent.
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