Many people believe that strong tradition helps to civilise a nation and that governments should therefore subsidise musicians, theatre companies, actors and artists. Explain whether you agree or disagree with this statement and what you think governments should do to promote the traditional cultural heritage of a country.

Many countries’ cultures are preserved by the strong

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inherent in the

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,

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and theatre of that

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. It has been argued that the

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should pay to promote the uniqueness of a

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’s culture by subsidising the

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,

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and actors

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keep culture alive. I agree that a

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should fund its citizens’ cultural pursuits, since part of a

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’s ,responsibility includes the preservation of its people’s own unique cultural

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. If a

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wants to preserve and maintain the

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and

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which is historically traditional to its

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it must take steps to ensure that those

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are valued and fostered.

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, a

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can help maintain the cultural

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of a

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by using tax money to build theatres,

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and concert halls, galleries and museums. By providing venues for

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,

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and actors to practice, perform and exhibit their

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, the

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is helping people come together to participate in traditional creative activities.

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, governments could provide grants, scholarships and education to

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and

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who are prepared to make special contributions to the preservation of a

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’s traditional

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and

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. By giving students of

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and

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incentives to maintain cultural

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, governments can promote the longevity of their people’s

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, if a student who was interested in fine arts was offered a full scholarship to explore and paint in traditional styles, that

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would be more inclined to follow that option if no scholarship was offered. In conclusion, I believe that governments should provide venues and offer grants and subsidies to

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and

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of traditional

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and

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, to maintain the strong

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tradition of the

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.