Prevention is better than cure. Do you agree or disagree that out of the country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health and education and preventive measures?

The allocation of the nation’s

health

budget plays an integral part in the well-being of its

people

. I agree that

prevention

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the prevention

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of

diseases

through

health

teachings and various modalities to avoid certain illnesses should have a greater percentage

from

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of

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the total

health

share.

Health

education provides

people

with information that they need to maintain a healthy body, avoid injuries, and prevent

diseases

.

Health

teaching and information dissemination

increases

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the awareness of the

people

on different programs provided by the

government

that they can take advantage of to promote their

health

and wellness. It

also

provides a venue for

health

care providers and

people

in authority to conduct seminars and conferences on how to avoid injuries and accidents at home and at work.

Furthermore

, knowledge

on

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of

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different

diseases

, primarily

its

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their

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prevention and early detection will prevent individuals from getting the disease, thereby, averting them to go through extensive and expensive treatments later on. With

this

approach, the

government

can save money and at the same time boost a healthier community.

In addition

, preventive measures and protocols when strictly observed and followed will have a great impact

in

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on

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minimizing, containing, and eventually stopping the spread of

diseases

and

decrease

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decreasing

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incidence

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the incidence

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of accidents and injuries. Examples of

which

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these

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are hand washing, immunization and vaccinations, wide distribution of barriers for sexually transmitted infections,

appropriate

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and appropriate

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and safe equipment and

gears

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gear

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for employees at work and for

people

at home

especially

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the kids. When these measures and protocols are observed,

spread

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the spread

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of infection decreases and preventable

diseases

and accidents can be eliminated,

hence

, the

government

will not have to spend more on the treatment and rehabilitation of its

people

. In conclusion, spending more on prevention rather than cure can significantly help the

government

achieve a healthy and safe community. By directing its resources on more essential aspects of

health

, it is proactively promoting the

people

’s optimum level of wellness

at

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while at

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the same time preventing any future illnesses and treatment.