Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

To start off with, as a global problem, Increasing the

cost

of

petrol

is the most effective way to fix growing

traffic

and

pollution

troubles

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There are some negatives and positive resuşts of increasing the

cost

petrol

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.

First

, the disadvantages. We can't travel much and take

long distance

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holidays.

In addition

,

Many

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people would lose their jobs.

Thus

, Transportation companies would go bankrupt/

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flash

.

However

,

There

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there

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would be less natural

pollution

and we can save the environment and

animals

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natural habitats.

Furthermore

, there would be

less

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traffic

accidents. I strongly agree that Increasing the

cost

of

petrol

is the most effective way to fix growing

traffic

and

pollution

troubles.

For example

, in Turkey,

traffic

accidents were lower than in past years because of the increase

of

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vehicles on the road.

Moreover

, there would be less air

pollution

.

For instance

, İn Kocaeli Turkey, there is a city that has the highest air

pollution

because of the factories.

Hence

, cancer rates around the country have increased tremendously. Let us not forget about the

animals

and the environment. When people don't go to the forests, the forest fires are low and

as a result

,

animals

' homes can be saved.

Consequently

, Many countries started to preserve natural areas for

anımals

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animals

and their living habitats

such

as nemrod mountain located in the East of Turkey. There isn't a forest but the government has gone through great measures to preserve the area because it is a historical place. Some measures that may be effective are electrical vehicles

such

as cars,trains and buses. Take a look at Elon Musk, who has produced electrical vehicles that lowers air

pollution

and not to mention,

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it

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can drive by

itself

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. In conclusion, Increasing the

cost

of

petrol

can have a more positive

result

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results

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than negatives. We have to do something in order to preserve our planet. How many more

animals

will go extinct due to our wrongful actions

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