Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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To start off with, as a global problem, Increasing the
cost
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of
petrol
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is the most effective way to fix growing
traffic
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and
pollution
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troubles
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There are some negatives and positive resuşts of increasing the
cost
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petrol
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, the disadvantages. We can't travel much and take
long distance
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holidays.
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,
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people would lose their jobs.
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, Transportation companies would go bankrupt/
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files
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would be less natural
pollution
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and we can save the environment and
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animals
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natural habitats.
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, there would be
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traffic
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accidents. I strongly agree that Increasing the
cost
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of
petrol
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is the most effective way to fix growing
traffic
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and
pollution
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troubles.
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, in Turkey,
traffic
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accidents were lower than in past years because of the increase
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vehicles on the road.
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, there would be less air
pollution
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, İn Kocaeli Turkey, there is a city that has the highest air
pollution
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because of the factories.
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, cancer rates around the country have increased tremendously. Let us not forget about the
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and the environment. When people don't go to the forests, the forest fires are low and
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,
animals
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' homes can be saved.
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, Many countries started to preserve natural areas for
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animals
and their living habitats
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as nemrod mountain located in the East of Turkey. There isn't a forest but the government has gone through great measures to preserve the area because it is a historical place. Some measures that may be effective are electrical vehicles
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as cars,trains and buses. Take a look at Elon Musk, who has produced electrical vehicles that lowers air
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and not to mention,
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it
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can drive by
itself
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themselves
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. In conclusion, Increasing the
cost
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of
petrol
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can have a more positive
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than negatives. We have to do something in order to preserve our planet. How many more
animals
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will go extinct due to our wrongful actions
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Discourage
  • Incentivize
  • Alternative energy
  • Public transportation
  • Lower-income
  • Carpool
  • Ride-sharing
  • Congestion
  • Urban planning
  • Pedestrian-friendly
  • Tax incentives
  • Electric and hybrid vehicles
  • Emissions standards
  • Cleaner vehicles
  • Congestion charges
  • Bicycle lanes
  • Sustainable
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