ome people with a good education and experience in their field decide to move abroad to work. Why do you think that is? What are the problems caused by this?

Nowadays, it's very common to leave
home
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country
and settle
in
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abroad, especially for youth is travelling overseas with vast experience in
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area
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to
work
and settle. possible reasons for immigration can be money ,
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work-life
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work life
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balance, better career opportunities and a better lifestyle. As talented youth is leaving their home
country
that is
a loss for the government as they are losing a creamy layer of talented people.
Firstly
, Moving
to
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abroad gives one
better
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opportunity for career growth,
for
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IT people have multiple companies who offer them good payscale and learning opportunities.
secondly
, in
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country
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they don't have
work
-
lifelife
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life life
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balance ,resulting in them working overnight without any extra payment
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to mental pressure.
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could possibly
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them to family problems. Another thing
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are not getting paid as per the
work
done by them.
obviously
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if some getting more pay for same role or task in
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country
, it will attract them.
On the other hand
in developed
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they have
better
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lifestyle
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lifestyles
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which could be less possible in underdeveloped countries. Now
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discuss problems, so the main problem is that
country
is losing their talented youth which could
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them
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lack
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of manual resources.
for
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a
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experienced person can do some piece of
work
in less time
rahther
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rather
then
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new
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joinee. Now they have to train
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person
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as well, which will
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defenitely
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take more time and money. Another reason finding
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resources
resoures
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resources
with
same
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experience can be more challenging .One major problem is that experienced is earning more and paying more taxes , if he or she leaves
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then
it will impact countries GDP as well. To conclude, it is now
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to move abroad for educated people so that they can live
better
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life
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. Government should focus and take some actions to retain
such
talent by providing better
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opportunities
opprtunities
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opportunities
and
better
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pay scale so that they won't lose the future of their
country
.
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