ome people with a good education and experience in their field decide to move abroad to work. Why do you think that is? What are the problems caused by this?
Nowadays, it's very common to leave
home
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country
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work-life
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country
that is
a loss for the government as they are losing a creamy layer of talented people.
Firstly
, Moving to
abroad gives one Change preposition
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better
opportunity for career growth, Correct article usage
a better
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a different
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,example
a
experienced person can do some piece of Change the article
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work
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rather
then
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than
new
joinee. Now they have to train Correct article usage
a new
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people
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the country
then
it will impact countries GDP as well.
To conclude, it is now trend
to move abroad for educated people so that they can live Correct article usage
a trend
better
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a better
life
. Government should focus and take some actions to retain Replace the word
lives
such
talent by providing better Correct your spelling
opportunities
opprtunities
and Correct your spelling
opportunities
better
pay scale so that they won't lose the future of their Correct article usage
a better
country
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