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Some people believer thar purcjase base on their need not advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some may think that purchasing should be done when it's required, but in ,contrast some may think that it should be done based on advertisements. I
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 at the given statement, and will be discussing it. in today, workaholic busy schedule people don't have much time to research about the
product
 which they need,
also
 searching for any
product
 or item on google we get n number of option,
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product
 the advertisement of the brand starts coming to our emails or while browsing youtube.
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 takes our attention towards that
product
 and we end up buying that
product
 without its need.
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 I think if there is no need of purchasing, one should ignore the ads that pop up on our screens or television. by ignoring
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 can save a lot and
also
 if there is a need of buying that
product
 we should always look for other options in the market. for ,example my brother always buys unrequired things by watching advertises and
this
 leads to extra money expenditure and no savings. nowadays companies or big brands keep more funds for marketing because they know everything depends on the marketing level. we should not buy anything on the bases of ads and promotions, because it's a trap that we can end up buying.that's why I would like to suggest that before taking anything everyone should do their own research.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Conscious consumer behavior
  • Persuasion
  • Informed consumerism
  • Discerning shoppers
  • Budget constraints
  • Economic factors
  • Influencer marketing
  • Consumer preferences
  • Purchasing decisions
  • Effectiveness of advertisements
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