Some believe that training is necessary to be a good teacher, others think, teachers do not need a training course. Discuss both views along with your opinion

some people think that it is necessary for teachers to take
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, and on the other side some may think that it's not needed. my opinion about the statement is each and every tutor should take training, will be talking in the latter part.I will be talking about both the views
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talking about the crowd who thinks that it is needed for teachers to get trained, before teaching students, because if the teacher is not able to explain what he or she wants to,
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hard for the students to get it. A Tutor should
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to, convert their thought precisely. in
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they should be trained that they should equally treat
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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