Experts throughout both the developing and developed world have debated whether the advent of sophisticated modern
technology
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such
as mobile phones, laptops and iPad have helped to enhance and improve Linking Words
people
's social lives or whether the opposite has become the case.
Personally, I strongly advocate the former view. Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss both sides using examples from the UK government and Oxford University to demonstrate points and prove arguments.
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to the younger generation who are more easily affected by Add the comma(s)
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people
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society.
The central reason behind Correct article usage
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, the invention of online social media sites and apps, Linking Words
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as Twitter and Facebook Linking Words
have
reduced crucial face-to-face interactions dramatically. Through Correct subject-verb agreement
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of these appealing and attractive mediums, Add an article
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people
feel in touch and connected yet lack key social skills and the ability to communicate.
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Secondly
, dependence on Linking Words
such
devices is built up frighteningly easily which may have a damaging effect on mental health and encourage a sedentary lifestyle. Linking Words
For example
, recent scientific research by the UK government demonstrated that 90% of Linking Words
people
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instead
of meeting up and spending quality time together or doing sport. Linking Words
As a result
, it is conclusively clear that these Linking Words
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real-life
real life
interactions.
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On the other hand
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there are significant downsides to technological developments, its’ multifold advantages cannot be denied. Linking Words
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technology
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such
as cellphones allows Linking Words
people
to connect freely and easily with no geographical barriers.
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therefore
keeping a feeling of proximity and closeness. Linking Words
For example
, an extensive study by Oxford University illustrated that Linking Words
people
who work, or study abroad and use applications like Facetime and WhatsApp to chat with their families, are less likely to experience loneliness and feel out of the loop than those who do not.
Consistent with Use synonyms
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line of thinking is that businessmen are Linking Words
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undoubtedly able to benefit from these advances by holding virtual Linking Words
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real-time
real -time
meetings using Skype which may increase the chance of closing business deals without the need to fly.
From the arguments and examples given I firmly believe that overall communication and Correct your spelling
real-time
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which
governments should not fail to address, it is predicted that its popularity will continue to flourish in the future.Correct word choice
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