One way to solve problem of congestion in cities is to build sky trains which run overhead rather than on or under the ground. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using this solution to solve congestion?
It is evident that erecting sky trains is a solution to the problem of traffic jams
instead
of providing traditional trains or subways. Linking Words
This
essay will demonstrate the pros and cons of the idea provided to solve the problem.
On the one hand, there are at least two advantages of the solution. Linking Words
Firstly
, because the transportation mode does not need to stop other vehicles when it runs, it would reduce the congestion more effective than the traditional one. Linking Words
Secondly
, if we compare the time-consuming construction process of it rather than the underground type, it requires less time because the builder just needs to install some flying tracks and does not need to dig the earth. Linking Words
For instance
, the Indonesian government spent 5 years developing traditional tracks, Linking Words
however
, they finish the installation of the flying way only in 3 years.
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On the other hand
, it is clear that the main disadvantages of the idea are the price of the development process and the budget of operation. Linking Words
Moreover
, the provider will necessitate more money to develop the proposal of it because sky tracks are one of the most expensive transportation modes. Linking Words
For example
, Indonesia has spent its national expenditure to create it, at around 120 billion Rupiah. Linking Words
Additionally
, budget allocation for its daily operation of it will be higher than other types; Linking Words
thus
, the price of the ticket will be likely not affordable.
In conclusion, the installation of sky trains to solve the traffic jam problems leads to benefits namely the effectiveness of reducing congestion and the quickness of erecting process, and negative impacts including the high budget of installation time and its daily operation.Linking Words
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