You had a problem while staying at a hotel and the receptionist was very helpful. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: * Describe the problem that you had * Explain how the receptionist helped you * Suggest ways to prevent that problem from happening again

Dear Sir, I, Kuljeet Kaur, stayed at the hotel for 3 days from the 10th of August. I am writing to you in connection with the problem which I faced at that time.
Firstly
, I was very joyful to see the interior of the room in which I was living.
However
, when I switch on the button of the Air conditioner, it did not work at all.
Also
, it was too hot and humid inside the room due to which I faced difficulty.
Then
, I called the receptionist who understands the problem well. Afterwards, she arranged for an electrician who can repair
this
device. It took around 3 hours in repairing the machine. She was really helpful and she
also
allot another room to me for that period.
Hence
, it would be really commendable if you could please check the technical faults in advance so that every customer is served in a better way.
Moreover
, it is
also
suggested that hotels should have an expert who can fix these problems. Hope you will pay consideration to it. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.
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