Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people's health and capacity for work?

To celebrate
this
delightful occasion, our class, 6A9,
have
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made
this
colourful five-fruit tray which contains
of
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different types of fruits.
This
symbolizes the admiration and gratitude of the Vietnamese to Heaven and Earth. Yellow ripe bananas give fullness, red persimmons bring hope. Succulent pomelos are turned into adorable puppies,
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good deeds and gestures. Sweet pomegranate, good luck. Pear: sweet taste, implying that everything is smooth and smooth. Apples represent wealth and prosperity. Around
that
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we
also
prepare diligent hedgehogs.
Besides
, indispensable are the traditional sweet cakes like the
love
of everyone for our childhood. The tray has been skillfully presented by her mother's hand, showing boundless
love
for us.
Therefore
, the
love
of
teachers
and students, and the
love
of family, are more closely attached every autumn. We promise ourselves that we will try our best to study and practice well to deserve all the
love
our parents and
teachers
have given us.
Finally
, allow me to wish on behalf of the students,
teachers
,
teachers
,
parents
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, good health, happy families and a happy and meaningful Mid-Autumn Festival. I would like to respectfully invite the delegates,
teachers
, and parents to stay and celebrate with us. Under the skilful hands of the students of class 6A9, our five-fruit tray has turned out to be amazing.
Lastly
, I wish everyone a wonderful and happy Mid-autumn festival. Thank you for listening.
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