International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
In modern society, travelling globally
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has been
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While
some propose that tourists can generate fortunes for many countries, Linking Words
conversely
, I believe global Linking Words
tourism
can impose detrimental effects on countries which outweigh its advantages.
Admittedly, there is no doubt that international Use synonyms
tourism
can promote cross-cultural exchange and boost the local economy. Culturally, tourists may learn about new Use synonyms
cuisine
or traditional rituals Fix the agreement mistake
cuisines
while
they share their culture with the locals. Linking Words
Therefore
helping to bridge an understanding of the differences between the local and Linking Words
global's
cultures. Economically, Change noun form
global
tourism
can increase the sales of industries like hotels and retail. Use synonyms
Moreover
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providing
more job opportunities to handle the increased need for travellers.
Despite these arguments, global Wrong verb form
it provides
tourism
will expose countries to greater dangers in two prospects(local inhabitants and the environment). Use synonyms
Firstly
, from the perspective of local inhabitants, international Linking Words
tourism
can cause numerous inconveniences for them. Use synonyms
For instance
, the travel agencies will activate multiple tourist buses for tourists, these buses are usually bulky and slow, so that, they can cause traffic jams in small cities. Linking Words
This
will bring inconvenience for citizens who travel by public transport or private vehicles to work or to schools. Linking Words
Additionally
, from the perspective of environmental impacts. Carbon dioxide is considered the prime attribute of global warming, which can be released from heavy transport like planes or tourist buses. Linking Words
Furthermore
, more Linking Words
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wood
woods
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wood
are
being cut for building materials to build facilities to accommodate travellers. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Hence
, with fewer trees to conduct photosynthesis and more carbon dioxide being emission, global warming is affecting the world at a rapid speed.
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To conclude
, global Linking Words
tourism
has brought tremendous benefits to many places across the world. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, exposing the global environment to considerable danger just to enhance one's country's economy.Linking Words
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task response
Ensure that the introduction clearly presents the stance on the topic and provides a preview of the main points to be discussed in the essay.
coherence and cohesion
Use more cohesive devices such as transition words and pronouns to link ideas within and between sentences. Also, ensure that each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and follows a logical order.
Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...