You are looking for a part-time job at a golf club. Write a letter to the manager of the golf club. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have tell him/her when you could start

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter as I am looking for

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job as a freelancer at your famous golf club. My name is John Mathews, born and brought up in the environment of Sydney, Australia. I was privileged enough to get an opportunity to study arts in sports management and hold a bachelor’s degree. I have three years of hands-on practice in

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that, I am an active listener as well as someone who is good at teamwork and decision making.

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in being good at time management. I am extremely passionate to commence my duty as soon as possible once you confirm my job as well as I would like to inform you that I prefer to work from 4 pm to 8 pm

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weekdays and full time on weekends. I would be delightedly grateful to you if you would consider me for

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position and give me an opportunity to work at your esteemed institution. Yours Faithfully, John Mathews

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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8 paragraphs

171 words

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