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You have been invited to attend an admissions interview for a prestigious college. Unfortunately, you cannot come at the proposed time due to a previous appointment. Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. In your letter: Introduce yourself and state your interest in the program Apologize and offer to come at a different time

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
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 letter regarding
invitation
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an invitation
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 to attend the admission
interview
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 on 27th June 2022 on Monday to the Mass
communication
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Communication
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 programme at your college and I profoundly
thanks
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thank
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to
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apply
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you. Unfortunately, I cannot come at
specified
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a specified
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 time because of my office seminar. I am John working in
multinational
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a multinational
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 company for the
last
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 five years and have scheduled
seminar
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a seminar
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 on the same day at 11 am. The company has given me
responsibility
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the responsibility
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 to handle
this
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 event and I cannot skip it. It will start in the morning and continue till 4.00 pm in the afternoon.
This
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 makes it impossible for me to meet you
in
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 the
interview
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 at the given time. Please accept my apology for not being able to attend the
interview
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 as planned.
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, I can meet you any other day whichever is convenient for you. Meanwhile, I would appreciate it if you could tell me the duration of the
interview
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.
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, will it be an oral
interview
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 only or do I have to take a test as well? Once again my sincere apology for not attending the
interview
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 at the mentioned time. I look looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, John
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